tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Tue Jul 01 12:42:23 2014
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[Tlhingan-hol] Too short (was: ghargh Doq HoD je -- loSDIch)
On 7/1/2014 3:08 PM, Steven Boozer wrote:
Well, it's your story and I agree that Klingon works better in
shorter sentences than English. But sometimes they can be too short.
I agree with this. Some people think that one-word sentences are the
epitome of style in Klingon, but I disagree.
Klingon can flow just as smoothly as English, but by mashing together
words and sentences rather than by stringing together subordinate
clauses and employing conjunctions. Sometimes it's just a matter of
adjusting the punctuation to get across the flow.
For instance, instead of
tlha'a HoD vIHo'. HoS. val. vaQ. Duj Doj ra'. vIqIH vIneH.
which sounds like you're pondering each word as you say it
I admire Captain Klaa (full stop). He is strong (full stop). He is
clever (full stop). He is aggressive (full stop). He commands an
impressive ship (full stop). I want to meet him (full stop).
you should put full stops around IDEAS:
tlha'a HoD vIHo': HoS, val, vaQ, Duj Doj ra'. vIqIH vIneH.
I admire Captain Klaa: he is strong, clever, aggressive, he commands
an impressive ship (full stop). I want to meet him (full stop).
When spoken aloud, the above has a pause where the colon is, but it
doesn't sound like you're finished with an idea. The commas are slight
pauses, but leading into the next word. Only at the periods do you
finish your idea and rest.
Remember also the sequence {beyHom bey bey'a'} meaning "roar in a great
crecendo." I don't think this is a lexicalized item; I think it is an
example of shoving words together to effectively express an idea.
Now, we usually end up applying English tone and stress to Klingon
sentences, simply because we don't have a lot of examples of or
information about native Klingon tones and stress. If you listen to
Kruge, Klaa, Vixis, or even Valkris, you don't hear them pausing after
every formal sentence (HablI' Su' labbeH = HablI': Su'! labbeH! = "Data
transceiving device (the addressee): I'm about to give a command!
Prepare to transmit!") The only exception I can think of is the very odd
few words of Klingon spoken by Chang during Kirk and McCoy's trial.
So: use small FORMAL sentences, but group them into single ideas.
--
SuStel
http://www.trimboli.name/
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