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[Tlhingan-hol] nuq bop bom: 'ay' cha'vatlh loSmaH Hut: nuH bey

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After a struggle for the weapon, qImyal's finger was tightening on the
trigger of a disruptor aimed at Mossam's face.<br><br>
The episode title is not a typo, despite the fact that I try to fix it
myself in every proofreading pass. :-) <br><br>
249 nuH bey<br><br>
<font size=2>laQbe' nISwI'. Mossam ghopDaq rIHwI' tu'lu'. [312]
ghobtaHvIS lelta'. Mossam qab mupmeH nISwI' lo'choH qImyal. reghchoHpu'
Mossam ghIch qevpob je. <br><br>
Soj qemtaHvIS chegh Qa'bar. be'pu' bejtaHvIS monHa' 'ej jatlh, «Mahoun,
beqlI' DaSeHnIS je SoH. yaSlI' maw' HoH qImyal 'e' qotlh.» <br><br>
«SoH DuHIvta' qImyal! DutoD Mossam!» jatlh Mahoun 'ach buSHa' Qa'bar.
tlhIngan woQ may' nIS neHbe'qu' Mahoun. raS bIngDaq So''eghta'DI'
QumwI'Daj chu' lel. jatlh, «Raulyu! HIjol! Hoch yelwIyyItngan, 'eSSIm jIH
je ghojol!» qaS pagh. jang pagh. «<i>Farsajii</i>!» jatlh Mahoun, qImyal
Mossam je bejtaHvIS. cheghlI' 'eSSIm, jengva' buy' qengtaHvIS. <br><br>
ghu' leghDI' 'eSSIm, SojDaj chagh 'ej ghonDoq lel. qImyal SIchlaHpa'
'eSSIm, Mossam yuvta' qImyal 'ej QamchoHlI'. qImyal ghopDaq QIS tu'lu'
'ej SuD 'etlh. Hu'be' Mossam. reghtaH qabDaj DopDaj je. SuDmo' Mossam
'Iw, MahounvaD 'oH teH law' tlhIngan 'Iw teH puS. Mahoun lubejtaH Mossam
mInDu' poSqu'. jachtaH Tiadynsan. qImyal DuQ 'eSSIm 'e' nID 'ach pe'vIl
'etlh way' qImyal QIS. tlhoS 'eSSIm volchaH SIj QIS. Qanbe'bogh Sung
Sutmey tIS neH tuQtaH 'eSSIm. loQ DoH. <br><br>
nom HIchDaq rIHwI' lanqa'lI' qImyal. jomchu'meH nISwI' qIpDI', wewchoH
nISwI' 'ej vIngchoH. nISwI' joqqu'moH qImyal, 'ach 'argh wab. wabvetlh
ghovbej Qa'bar. ghobwI'pu' bejqa', Qa'barDaq jorbeHbogh nuH jaDqu'choHDI'
qImyal. DoS ghaH'e' 'e' tlhojDI' Qa'bar, yay'. qImyal ghop mejtaHvIS
nISwI', jop 'eSSIm. qImyal rIQmoHbe' 'a QeqHa'moH. Hew mup nISwI', Supqa'
'ej lavmey 'emDaq pum, vIngqu'taHvIS. jor. [311]<br><br>
jorDI' wovqu'. yay'moH wab. 'eSSIm qImyal je QamHa'moH. lavmey meQmoH.
jach 'e' mev Tiadynsan. Tia! lavmey natlhpu'DI' qul, lot leghlaHchu'
Mahoun. pe'vIl <i>Farsajii</i> yaSpu' porghmey HIvpu' jorwI'. porgh
'ay'mey luchevlu'pu' 'ej lughomHa'lu'. HeghwI'pu' toghlaHbe' Mahoun.
leghbe'meH nachDaj tlhe'. Mahoun juS Qa'bar, Qugh je, qImyal luyovtaHvIS.
qImyal DuQmeH jopqa' 'eSSIm. way'chu' qImyal. DaH cha' 'etlhmey yan
qImyal. DIjchuq 'etlhmey. qImyal luSuv wej nuv 'ach HIghwI' po' luSuv
loHwI' qan, Qel Doy', yIn tej je. rIghlaw' Qugh.<br><br>
may' bejvIp Mahoun. QumwI' chu'qa' Mahoun. «Raulyu!» jatlh. meHDaq
ghaHbe''a' jay'? <br><br>
raSmey bIngDaq beb HeH ghoS Mahoun. bIng bej. jen beb. yavDaq naghmey,
yergho' luQutlhbogh baS naQmey chong leghlaH. Supchugh Mahoun, rIQchoH
'ej SaqDI' yItlaHbe'. chaq Hegh. Qe' retlhDaq SaH qegh'a' chong 'ej
'oHDaq naw'meH letlhHom tu'lu'. 'oHDaq SaqlaHchugh vay', bIng ghoSmeH
toSlaH. SuDqang Mahoun. Hu'. qIvDu' SIH 'ej SuprupchoH. <br>
---<br>
SKI: Mahoun seeks escape from the mayhem qImyal has precipitated at the
rooftop party.<br>
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</font>[312] A Canadian army-trained weapons technician indicated that
mishandling of a weapon, such as getting the trigger twisted while it was
knocked against the ground in a struggle could prevent it from firing.
But I decided that crafty Mossam was more interesting than lucky Mossam,
and had her pull out the power pack &quot;clip&quot; instead. leaving the
damage to the weapon to be discovered as qImyal tries to jam the charge
back in.<br><br>
[311] I researched Star Trek canon, looking for information on the blast
radius of an energy weapon on overload. It's suggested that a disruptor
can be set to overload, and I've seen sites claiming a 37 metre and 50
metre blast radius for the effect. Kirk thought it would take out a whole
deck of the Enterprise, but we've seen them used as a grenade, where the
effect is less than the distance a man can throw it. Final conclusion: a
disruptor on overload does just as much damage as the story requires.
Perhaps it depends on the charge remaining on the weapon, or how
vigourously you shake it after it starts whining. </body>
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