tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Tue May 29 09:33:09 2001
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RE: KLBC: Grammer questions
- From: "Stauffer, Tad E (staufte7)" <[email protected]>
- Subject: RE: KLBC: Grammer questions
- Date: Tue, 29 May 2001 12:33:33 -0400
qonwI' said:
How about --this-- one? :)
>Seven vessels attacked the base at dawn.
jajlo' waw' luHIv Soch Duj.
maj.
>Before the battle, the gunner was uneasy.
qaSpa' may', bIt baHwI'.
maj.
>Before the battle has ended, the gunner will fall unconscious.
rInpa' may', vul baHwI'.
maj.
>After the battle has ended, the gunner will regain consciousness.
rInDI' may', vulHa' baHwI'.
maj.
>When the atmosphere escaped from the space station, the citizens
died.
tengchaHvo' narghDI' muD, Hegh rewbe'.
maj.
>The soldiers have individual life support systems, so they live
on.
yIntaghmey ghaj negh, vaj yIntaH.
Your sentences here are all grammatically correct, so I have no further
corrections. majQa'.
If you haven't read it already, Qov also made some comments on how you could
make your sentences closer to what she was thinking when she wrote the
original sentences. You can find the message in the archives at
/tlhIngan-Hol/2001/May/msg00384.html
- taD