tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Sun May 14 11:41:03 2000
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Re: translation comments
- From: [email protected]
- Subject: Re: translation comments
- Date: Sun, 14 May 2000 14:29:45 -0400 (EDT)
Somebody (DloraH?) wrote:
>jIboghDI' Hov'a'maj bavtaHvIS tera' Quv'e'
>rur qaSDI' qoSwIj Hov'a'maj bavtaHvIS tera' Quv'e'.
I think this sentence might benefit from being split up
into 3 or 4 sentences.
I offer:
jIboghDI' HovmajDaq tera' Quv ngu'lu'.
qaSDI' qoSwIj, Quvvam rurqa' tera' Quv.
Quv'e'mo' neH qaS qoS.
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