tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Thu Jun 19 12:32:51 1997
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nachSo'wI'Hom Doq lut - DaH chu' 'ej Dublu'
- From: "Neal Schermerhorn" <[email protected]>
- Subject: nachSo'wI'Hom Doq lut - DaH chu' 'ej Dublu'
- Date: Thu, 19 Jun 97 19:33:24 UT
ghItlhvam vIleghmoHta' - DoS Dun mojpu' 'ej jIquv - pebaHtaH!
nachSo'wI'Hom Doq lut
be'Hom tu'lu'.
nachSo'wI'Hom Doq 'oH pongDaj'e',
reH nach So'taHmo' ngupDaj Doq.
ja' SoSDaj :
DaH SoSnI' rop juHDaq yIjaH
'ej ghaHvaD Sojvam yIqem.
yIyep! Ha'DIbaHmey tu'lu' 'ej nISopqang bIyepHa'chugh!
ja' nachSo'wI'Hom Doq: qalobneS, SoSoy.
'ej SoSnI'Daj juHDaq yItchoH.
tugh Ha'DIbaH ghom. tlhob nachSo'wI'Hom Doq: nuqneH, Ha'DIbaH?
nep Ha'DIbaH, 'ej ja': qatlhej vIneH. nuqDaq DaghoS?
yepHa' nachSo'wI'Hom Doq, 'ej jang: SoSnI'wI' juH vIghoSlI'.
rop ghaH 'ej Sojvam vIqemlI', 'ach chotlhej vIneHbe'. Hopbe' juHDaj.
ja' Ha'DIbaH: naDevvo' yIghoS! vaj yItqa' nachSo'wI'Hom Doq.
DaH QubtaH Ha'DIbaH: qIghDaq vIghoSchugh, jIH 'eq law' ghaH 'eq puS!
vaj SojDaj SoSnI'Daj ghaH je vISoplaH!
qIgh ghoS Ha'DIbaH 'ej SoSnI' juH tu'. SoSnI' rop mer, 'ej Sop Ha'DIbaH!
Sopta'DI' SoSnI' Sut tuQ'eghmoH 'ej QongDaqDajDaq Qot.
tugh paw nachSo'wI'Hom Doq. ja':
SoSnI', bISaHtaH'a'?
ja' Ha'DIbaH: HIja', nachSo'wI'Hom Doq. HIghoSqu'!
SoSnI'qoqDaj legh.
ja': SoSnI', tInqu' mInDu'lIj qar'a'?
ja' Ha'DIbaH: 'ach qaleghqu''a'?
SoSnI', tInqu' ghopDu'lIj qar'a'?
'ach qaHotqu''a'?
SoSnI', tInqu' Ho'Du'lIj qar'a'?
DaH pe'vIl nachSo'wI'Hom Doq jon Ha'DIbaH qu'.
'ach qaSopqu''a'?!?
'ej be'Hom quvHa' Sop.
rIntaH lut.
To comment on comments made -
by SuStel
>qatlh SuD be'Hom? qatlh Doqbe'?
DaH jInepHa'. jISovbe'!
by Mark Shoulson
>>Note: in this story nachSo'wI'Hom Doq is a proper name.
>That's a name and a half!
So is Little Red Riding Hood!
>chaq "ghaytan nISop bIyepHa'chugh" "nISopbej bIyepHa'chugh" ghap vIja'
jIH.
I attempted to convey that the animals wouldn't eat her if she obeyed and was
careful, but would be willing to if she was a dishonorable little s*** and
wasn't.
>"bangwI'" to *me* tends to sound more like romantic love (as in the only
canon uses of it).
bIlugh. Look what you get instead!! HA! Your suggested names were fine - but
none of our names seemed to work well to me.
>And why the hands? We have words for ears, nose, smell, and hear; those
are more believable in the story...
Don't really understand this criticism - Eyes see, hands touch, teeth eat, it
all seems OK to me....
And both these gentlemen pointed out my error switching SoS for be' - these
things happen when you are weaning away from the dictionary!
puqpu'rajvaD yIlaD! chaq quvHa'choHmoHbe' 'ej Ha'DIbaH Soj lumojbe'!
Qermaq