tlhIngan-Hol Archive: Thu Jul 27 15:18:35 1995
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Re: }}} Advice
- From: [email protected]
- Subject: Re: }}} Advice
- Date: Thu, 27 Jul 1995 14:18:35 -0500
Alan Anderson writes:
> [email protected] writes:
> > "Will all your worries add a single moment to your life?" Mt.6.27
> > "rejmorgh SoHchugh vaj yInlIj ghur'a'?"
>
> First, {yInlIj ghur'a'} sounds backwards. I'd say {ghur'a' yInlIj}.
Well. I wasn't asking for advice - I was giving it. :)
AND, the life isn't lengthening SOMETHING, it is being
lengthened.
> Second, getting bogged down in details, I like {SoHchughtaH} better.
rejmorgh SoH.
> Third, I'd include {poH} to emphasize "lifeSPAN" rather than "life"
> and make it {ghur'a' yInlIj poH}.
Too wordy.
* rejmorgh SoHchugh vaj yInlIj ghur'a'?* * Will all your worries add a single *
* [email protected] * * moment to your life? Mt.6.27 *
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